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I think you should talk about the school more. There not much detal in this. I think you should change the title.

It was kind of hard to tell what you were talking about at first but later I found out. It was okay you could make it better, tell more about ...

I like it here is why, if I made a world I would make it the same as yours. I think you should make the words after the commas in ...

Okay, I will.

I have writers block right now.

I liked it.

I have writer's block right now, I'm trying to write four stories.

I found this a being quite good. I think you should make it a little longer and with more action.

It was kind of funny but It~s takes a lot for me to laugh.

I know that George Bush Sr. was a vice-president and a president.

I liked your story.

You put the emotion in your story very nicely.

Thanks for reviwing. I'm going to take the sugestions that you gave me to enhance my story. Your I'm sick and tired of all your crap thing is very funny.