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Hi there!! I love how this piece is written. The beginning is funny and super cute! I loved it, really. I like your writing style too. I also love how ...

Alrighty, Heyy there! So, this piece is good, I won't lie. It's really decent. It was a little blunt, I mean, it had a good hook, it really did, but ...

This is... wow. Sorry for that, but this hits really REALLY close to home, and kudos to you for having the courage to share this. You are seen. I see ...

Hi there! At first glance, I didn't want to read this poem. I feared it was gonna be something completely different than it is, and I'm sorry for that. All ...

Hey there! I like how well the story follows. I'm a little disappointed to see the chapters are as short as they are, but it's still a wonderful story. It ...

Hi there! So, from what I can tell, this looks like it's a religious piece, and if it is, it's written well. I don't know much about religion, so I ...

Heyyy! So, all in all, I love this. It's a really peaceful piece, and it's gentle. It's not harsh, it doesn't throw the reader around, it's truly peaceful. This is ...

This is harsh. I mean, the topic itself is. Kudos to you for having the courage to put this out there. The only real comment I have to make about ...

Wow... Just.. Wow. Usually, I'm not confused, but you really got into my mind. I'm still questioning "Is this real or fake?" And the ending hit hard. By all, means. ...

Hiii! So, I'm a tad confused on what this is about. I'm assuming it's a poem, and I read it, and it's lovely. I mean, talking about birds and their ...

Hey there! Uhm... So for starters.. I think the paragraphs are a big long. They're really hard for me to read, and it's a tad overwhelming. I have nothing against ...

Heyy! I just wanna say for starters, I love how this story started out. It's not typically my preference of genre, but for reading it, I enjoyed it a lot! ...