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Re: You Are Not a Failure
Hi there! Straycat here for a review. First, I really like your topic. It kinda reminds me of what I've been doing lately (I'm actually feeling the same way about ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Moving On
Hiiii
Jun 8, 2018 -
Re: This is my depression
Hi Lonely Star. At first I want to compliment your work...it's very straight forward. You used words that literally described how a depressed person feels and does, and for me ...
Mar 4, 2017 -
Re: The Seagull Heist
Hey Dracula! How do you manage to keep your short story this amazing even though it's just about seagulls and kids eating their lunch? You have that gift of well ...
Nov 7, 2016 -
Re: Fateful Fortune
You're a really good writer I must say. You keep the readers well projected to what you are trying to say. It kept me interested reading the story until the ...
Nov 7, 2016 -
Re: Red & Blue
Hello there! I would say that you got a good poem there. You depicted the situation of the society in a well understood manner. I am completely delighted to how ...
Jul 17, 2016 -
Re: broken hearts can always mend
Hi Spark, Well done! You actually made me interested to read your poem and it's very heart felting. The good thing here is you did not fill your words with ...
Apr 21, 2014 -
Re: .
Hey WindSailor, There's a great job! An article that has the content of a true wisdom and understanding. I honestly agree on your testimonies and declaration that our society is ...
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: My Heart Beats.....
Hey Tulip, I just read your poem. It's simple yet it clearly depicts the emotion that the character is portraying. Good word choice also but I just want to point ...
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: starspots
Hey Sunkissed, Your work is great. It's simple yet it gives the reader a clear picture of the point you are getting at, well in my point of view. I'm ...
Mar 24, 2014 -
Re: The Lost Love Found
Hello there! Well, It was very interesting to read this short story of yours. You put a touch of reality and coincidence that makes it catchy and easy to relate ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: The Monster in the Corner
8/10 Ho there! From the start your piece is very alluring, catchy actually. It strikes an angle that allows the readers like me to imagine what it is like to ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Ten past four.
8/10 Very brief yet so precise. Even though it's only a few stanzas you deliberately concise your thoughts and go straight to the point in which losing someone you really ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Crossword
Hello there! The beginning of your poem is very catchy, interesting actually. I like the way you illustrate and compare life with crosswords. The usage of concrete words is brilliant. ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: How philosophy can turn anything upside down
The content is very interesting and mind boggling. It persuades readers to think about things that we thought were factual and credible to base with. I agree to what he/she ...
Jun 6, 2013
