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Okay, at the time of this review I was pretty young and didn't appreciate it enough, great insights. Over the years I have reworked that piece, will share the update ...

Ok that was simply great . Loved every piece of it.

ooooo, can't wait to read this! Great piece this is.

thanks for the review, i will have to revise the scene after that. the work itself isn't focused on the sex scenes as yet, only that the "about" section of ...

cool, wish you the best. and a smooth sail through school. Education these ends is still suspended till further notice and i miss them days with friends. ...

hey, deep emotion here! you'll eventually have to brake that ice(the not talking to her about it) but as you've decided not to at the moment then truly enjoy the ...

hey, deep emotion here! you'll eventually have to brake that ice(the not talking to her about it) but as you've decided not to at the moment then truly enjoy the ...

i see, thanks ;)

thanks...yep things are quite fine my ends, thanks for the concern.

thanks...lemme try working on that final blend

That's the beauty and essence of it all, writing .... Make someone lost in emotion... An escape route from the unfathomable scoffs of life.

Okay the last lines really got me,your friend Carter should read this...lol

Ohh it does help, i don't usually write poems so such a review worms me, thanks!

Thanks, that's a great review, will work out the mistakes. For the tenses, i was working towards the present tense evident in paragragh one (it was alpha one to tell ...

Thnks