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Hello there. :) Above her S he was aware of a twinkling light above her that startled her out of her reminiscing. Looking back up at him, she saw that ...

Hello there. :) I think Hockey fan already said a lot, but I still have some things you could improve. Today was going to be the start of my new ...

Hello there. :) First one to review! Woo, not like I'm usually not because I just don't have a life like that. ;) We then did our secret handshake we ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression on your story. Many thoughts come into mind when I think about what waits ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on my overall impression of your story. It took up all my guts but I had to do it. ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then move on to my overall impression. " That’s just it,” he said. “I wonder, but I don’t know what about. ...

Hello there. :) This is really short, and I think you could really write more on this topic than you actually do. Like writing a flash back to an actual ...

Hello there. :) First off, I want you to say to your friend that she writes beautifully. I don't think I have any nitpicks for this, and everything was close ...

Hello there. :) I was just going to review, but then I saw that you only did two reviews in more than a year... The whole point of this site ...

Hello there. :) The first thing I have to say is that I agree with the other people who have reviewed this. You seem to be giving us an awful ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. The silverware , which had been passed down to Lisa from her great-grandmother and ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with the overall impression. A fight they have already lost, They had? I'm not sure if this is ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. She poured herself a glass of water and slowly sipped at it. I think ...

Hello there. :) I'll begin with the nitpicks and then go on with my overall impression. Crying over the man that had ruined my life seemed incredibly stupid but yet ...

Hello Alpha, here again to review. :) “I came back from the bathroom and this girl was all over him , so I freaked out and ran.” Occupying my bench ...