theobliviousoracle

Actually the narrator is simply making an observation saying that everyone bows, he's himself unsure and he is as confused as the reader. Then he looks around and feels the ...

Thank you for the review. I appreciate your help and your concern but Rituparna the only reason I posted it was to learn my mistakes and to do better the ...

Thank you!

Okay, typo alert! I meant haste not hate. Sorry.

First off, I've had harsher and second, yours wasn't harsh at all. I wrote this in quite a hate as it came to me in a flood of emotions. So ...

Thank you! I'm flattered. :)

Short. To the point. Awesome. You could have elaborated a few things more but short stories are better short. So, conclusion: G R E A T

And why am I your favorite type of reader?

Sorry, didn't mean to do it twice.. (*How does it happen every single time o_O *)

Okay, so first of all I can totally relate to it. So let me tell you what I thought of it. First and foremost, the description you gave along with ...

You are welcome. Not that it matters but it's actually 10 PM here in India. Will check out your work tomorrow for sure. :)

Yes! I just remembered by reading the comment. That was an absolutely breathtaking one, so is yours Rituparna.

Beautiful. Absolutely simply beautiful. I love the images that flash in my head, I love the rhythm, I love the hope: it's amazing. Let's keep it short, should we? Keep ...

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to do it twice. *apologetic face* :)

This is good, real good. There are things I would like to mend but since it's just a part of the bigger picture, I'll wait till then; not much though. ...