theironnovelist

Thank you! The words came to me just as suddenly as I wrote them down. It was during a night where I was feeling very discouraged because of family matters ...

it's all cool. Do you want to start your one-line story idea?

yes, marissa, for the last time i read it XD

thanks much! it's my first attempt at a serious-tone realistic fiction.

Thanks I'll take these into consideration! To clarify, 'Maddie' is Fae's middle name, so saying both is kind of Angeline's nickname for her. I'll try to explain that in the ...

no............

yeah. yet

Pendr I didn't know you wrote this! I've seen this all over! Congrats! :D I won't critique it because in all honesty I didn't read it all because...you know...I'm not ...

no problem! I struggle with it too; that's why I write free-verse! XD So I probably wouldn't be too helpful on that aspect.

thanks very much!!

I always use my husband instead of Lydia XD

True, there were some things out of order to make it a story and not so much a guide to skyrim. XD (and I've found if you just keep running ...

thanks!

you mean in the next chapter? yes i was planning. this chapter is really a transition chapter

(it will also make sense when the history of Faalshire's people and rule are explained in the next chapter)