theironnovelist

love it

yes, you used swoon right XD and ikr same. is that allowed? can I have a crush on my own character? lol thanks! and i love that "sibling zone". i'll ...

thank you so much steph! you are so encouraging to me!

thanks! yes 'sun' and 'hum' are "near-rhymes", which are seen in poetry more often than you might think at times. I might try to find a way to reword it

thanks; if it sheds light on the piece at all, it isn't intended to be a love poem. it's based off an addiction.

DUDE! THIS IS ON THE FRONT PAGE! CONGRATS!

coo. i should probably emphasize the fact that The Provocation isn't a very big regiment and that's one of the main reasons Akers is keeping his cool. but yeah I'll ...

i made some of these changes thanks:) and yes that's what it means

thanks! it is hard to grasp what I'm trying to get across in this poem without explaining it. it was derived from my feelings of wishing to create something from ...

yeah i dunno if those work

thanks so much for coming back xD! yeah i realized the first time I wrote this I typed "ammunition" thinking cannons in my mind, and not thinking that the readers ...

a complete space between them?

thanks for the input:) i'll get editing soon. (I wish I didn't have to post these in such short segments- then no one would read them...)

thanks! this is only half the first chapter, more of an introduction that doesn't exactly set the whole story up. these aren't the main characters, but I get what you're ...

thanks! i appreciate every word:)