theironnovelist

I'm not really gonna review this much but can I just say I like the fact that you made your title so intriguing. Christians and non-Christians alike will feel compelled ...

I try not to review all poetry as the same, I totally understand it's all about how the author perceives it. I just think generally the poetry I read could ...

thanks so much! I plan to write an entry specifically on inspiration and music will definitely be on the list!

thanks! I did mean 'yen' in that stanza; it's another word for an urge. i'll take these into consideration!

thanks! I think i was tired when I wrote this and messed up with those semicolons :)

No problem:). If you read my response to the first review at the bottom it might explain some of your confusion

wow; it's so encouraging to hear someone likes what I'm doing. Thank you so much:) I appreciate it

Thanks! I always appreciate a reader who digs deeper into poems :) for clarification, 'overcome with pining' means to be overcome with a sort of nostalgia, 'in a dark room ...

sounds awesome! glad I could help

sure thing. In the first line you mentioned, change 'bore' to 'bored'. In the second line, you added an extra space after 'was'. As far as the flow, that's up ...

Which words?

XDAnd yeah it took FOREVER to format this bc it didn't form right when published. And I figured it didn't have to be a circle, just round.

Thanks. The hyphens are to signal a slight pause since 'around' begins both... phrases/sentences

OH my. yeah i should re-review this!

hey, that's awesome. i think encouragement is just as important as criticism.