thehobbitgangster

thanks to everybody who took the time to read this! I like to write parodies and I'm thinking about posting more soon!

Alright! Some background for the characters! Feels like it's building up to something! I really liked these scenes. Keep it up!

Thank you very much! I'll try to write in only one tense!

gracias for all the comments. :)

This chapter is short and leaves me with a lot of questions. I definitely agree that you should keep going so I can find out more!!

Man, those peeps sound so good!! Good job! This describes exactly how I feel every time I pass peeps in the store! Definitely awesome!!

Oh thanks!!

er sorry if this was a little confusing. I wasn't actually talking about butterflies as in insects, but butterflies as in people who swim the butterfly in swimming. Hope that ...

Oh my gosh... This poem gave me the shivers but at the same time I was compelled to read more. Really awesome job!

This is a pretty good start. I could really see this as a movie script. It does seem like this story could go in many directions so I am excited ...

Thanks to all!!! I tried to think of a clever title for this poem, but was having a hard time thinking one up. I really did want the ending to ...

I have to agree that the imagery in this piece is wonderful. The images of Atticus dancing in the rain were amazing!!! Really good job!!!!