thegoldendragon

HA HA HA, that was awesome, I like the rhyming, and it was especially funny at the end when it said he read it upside down. What kind of test ...

You do a good job with dialogue, but what the heck is happening? there are spaces in between the chapters that a lot happens. Who is Val? Landlord? Everyone else? ...

Never seen this before, great look on what it would actually be in a real assassin's school, why wouldn't there be fights, violent training, and that stuff? I really don't ...

This is awesome! I love what you can do with detail, and with no dialogue! (Yes, this can sometimes be a good thing!) You could definitely write a book! It ...