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thegirlwhowrites

thegirlwhowrites

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Everlark- After Mockingjay

    Hi again, thanksfor reviewing my works! :D I'll go back and lookover those points (which I agreed with) so thanks again!

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fanfiction Re: Everlark- After Mockingjay

    Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it! I'll go back and look over those points :D

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Fourth World: Chapter Three

    Thanks so much for the thorough critique, I needed that! You helped a lot, I'll go over this now and fix where needs fixing. I agreed with everything you said! ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: The Fourth World: Chapter One

    Thanks for being interested and reviewing my works!! :D No, this isn't related to the Hunger Games haha and it's not fanfic... just a novel of my own creation I'm ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl and the Bird

    Thank you so much! I appreciate your suggestions, I'm not very good at poetry (not structure-wise anyways) so I'll edit this soon :)

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Fourth World: Chapter Three

    ahahaha whoops yeah gotta fix that #psalm I'm happy you liked it! Writing the fourth chapter right now...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Girl and the Bird

    I'll think about that! :D Thanks!

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: No Winner Left

    No, I've never seen it... but sounds a lot like what I was aiming for with the poem! Thank you!

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: No Winner Left

    Thank you so much!

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: No Winner Left

    Hi there :) You're right with the flow of the poem... I hardly ever write poetry and I'm still practicing. :D I knew it didn't quite beat with a good ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: No Winner Left

    Thank you so much Rachel :) I'm a fan of your poetry and I'm being honest when I tell you that when I saw in my notifications that you had ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: No Winner Left

    Hi, I appreciate your criticism, thank you! You're right, that is a hunger games reference and I think that now I should go back and maybe rephrase it. I was ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: No Winner Left

    NOTE: PLEASE DON'T MIND THE WEIRD PARAGRAPGHING IN THE FIRST STANZA. FOR SOME WEIRD REASON IT WON'T LET ME TAKE OUT THAT SPACE :) THANK YOU.

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Hunger Games: After Mockingjay: Gale comes back

    omg how could I have not thought of that.... gahhhhh OF COURSE I'VE SEEN IT :D ONLY THE #1 MOVIE IN THE WORLD FOR TWO WEEKS IN A ROWWWW!!! TOMORROW ...

    Dec 22, 2013
  • Art » General, General Re: Perfect Idea

    Thank you SO much!! I was wondering how people did that!!

    Dec 22, 2013


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites