thegirlwhofateloves

I like the whole poem, but I really love the last stanza.

well my mum's an uuuuuugly creature, I'll tell you that for free - I dunno where I got my amazingly good looks from!!! lol. It's a groovy little poem.

That's a really touching this based on something that's really happened to you? Because it sounds as though it is.

You make me laugh. Feel free to kill life has no meaning anyway ...but you have to find me first. So there! x x x

lol amusing stuff! :elephant: (Sorry...I just really like the way it dances!)

Confusing but compelling...possibly because it's confusing! But kind of groovy at the same time. One question...are you gay?!

Nothing groundbreaking, but that doesn't mean it's not any good! I did like it, but I have to say that I dislike slang in poems, unless it's appropriate. It kind ...

Amen to that.

It's good. Expressive and forceful.

It's about stupid behaviour that I experience because I'm an idiot. It's about my self destruction...if that doesn't sound too pretentious! x x x

that's a lot better and i do like it this time! thanks for the translation - honestly, for someone who got a b in gcse spanish i know noooooothing!!! x ...

No it's just about me...and yes, what I want...kind of...

I'm not sure...I'm really not! Genuinely - I really can't make up my mind if I like it or not! como tu quieres la vida? -what does that mean?!

Too many blows and flows.

Oh. My. God. NO! And the red made my eyes go all funny. Baaaad choice. I agree with matt bellamy...Hallmark here you come!!