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By Jack Lurk

by Snoink

See the mothers in the park
Ugly creatures chiefly
Someone must have loved them once
But in the dark and briefly.

By Jack Lurk

I'm pretty sure Jack Lurk is a pseudonym for my mom, lol. When my mom and dad dated, my dad said he was hounded by Jack Lurk, a disgruntled employee, who somehow, instead of being the intelligence (Dad said Jack was never intelligent) he ended up being the counterintelligence and somehow compromised the USA since my dad is "really" a secret agent. Yeah...

Anyway, Mom gave me permission to use this poem.

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Mon Nov 07, 2005 11:20 am
thegirlwhofateloves says...

well my mum's an uuuuuugly creature, I'll tell you that for free - I dunno where I got my amazingly good looks from!!! lol.
It's a groovy little poem.

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Sun Nov 06, 2005 5:17 am
Sam says...

Cool poem, even cooler story behind it.

Interesting concept though...moms=ugly creatures? :P

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