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Hey I am going to review your work :D Hey I think this is good but I don't understand what grade she should be getting, or what she usually gets. ...

This book is one of the best of its time. It was clear, precise and went to the point, and the description is just immaculate. I read it for the ...

Hey Ktg :), I just want to say before I start that it's hard not to be hash - even if it is really good, because we are here to ...

Hey I am going to review your work today! Do you remember how you always said to me "Death is never sad, unless the person never lived."? I would get ...

Hey Kaedee Nice idea Spring was now just around the corner and following it the end of school. Nice opener, the metaphor works well Draco paced about in the Slytherin ...

Howdy stela I'm going to review your work :D My mother pulled me out of school for the rest of the week. She came up with a story so far ...

Howdy Newbornwriter xD I'm going to review your work today -Prologue Unlike normal families that pass down jewelry, I think you mean jewellery books, money, etc. The Halliwell passed down ...

Hey retrodisco Good luck for the contest I'm going to review your work here :D I never liked my name. What kid wants to be called Edmund? I am named ...

Hey Peanut! I'm going to review your work :D My finger tips tingle as they drum against the script. The lines we had practiced every day until twilight I think ...

Jesse, There is something I never got a chance to say to you. It's something that you've been waiting a long time for. This is nice because we straight away ...

Hey I am gonna review you for today xD 18th November 2000 Dear Diary, It’s been three years since Dad left home. Nice short opener! I like it :) He ...

Hey =) I am going to critique your work today. Some of these corrections will be general others will be matter of opinion, it's up to you whether you agree...I ...