thefireinmeisJC

Wow. This was....interesting. Hmm, normally I wouldn't associate it with horror. It was...eye opening? Anyways, great job! On with the review: See if your wild eyes can penetrate the inkiness ...

Wow. This was awesome. *Gold stars* Now for the "review" (if I can find anything...): With the sound of a promise of hope, her green eyes opened and searched throw ...

Thanks for PMing me! I did forget just like I thought I would. "The members of Government wish to express their sympathy to the family of William Bennett. We are ...

Hi newbie! I mean blackpencil. haha I shall be your wonderful reviewer today. (I'm JC. Nice to meet you. *shakes hand*) I saw your profile beforehand and your overview of ...

Hello! I'm JC and I'll try to be your reviewer today. Its getting a tad late so I may have to finish up tomorrow ^^ Okie dokie. Your first paragraph ...

Hello again! I thought I might review your work.^^ As I came closer towards the door I heard a man sobbing violently. Emotions flooded over me, as I raced to ...

I'm finding myself having an urge to review stuff... Anyway, hello! This is JC talking/typing/babbling/reviewing. Julia turned to her little brother, while still keeping an eye on the strange mist ...

I'm really sorry for saying this especially since I *hate* when people do this to me but I promise to make a REAL review on this tomorrow!! frankly, I'm tired ...

Ahh, it feels good to get back to writing some reviews... I stood at the edge of the building I don't mean to sound nitpicky but uh, I'm assuming you ...

This was interesting. I liked your writing and it looks like Moo already did all the nit picks so I'll do a review on other stuff, that's not grammar. Ok, ...

This is one of the most hilarious poems I've ever read. *Gold stars* Since I'm supposed to be doing school work right now (the benefits of homeschooling...), I will have ...

Hello Cat! Every morning, Mr. and Mrs. Swan made Mya cook breakfast around seven. Mya would always wake up an hour before and get ready. Then, before she would go ...

Excuse my laziness in this review. :P Ok, I know this is lyrics and not poetry but shouldn't you at least keep the stanzas to 3 lines or 4 lines? ...

This is very interesting because I totally disagree with TL G-Wooster. I LOVE the "purple prose"... Which is interesting for me to say because I usually hate "long non-action oriented ...

This is interesting..short but cute. Not that Tommy showed a soul the photograph was his and his alone. I don't know, though the first time I read this, I got ...