Young Writers Society

Hey @SMLocke Nice to see you again. Love stories are beautiful when it has a beautiful end. But one sided-love is dreadful. It hurts not because you fall but you ...

Hello The poem is fascinating. The message and idea of the poem are very clear and it is very engaging. I liked the theme of your poem and I am ...

Hey, I loved your work. It struck me really hard. The emotional essence of the poem can be felt by the reader . How one can hide deep feelings inside ...

Hey I liked the way you expressed your view. Yeah, people longs for being perfect and having a perfect life. But as you said there's no life without imperfections . ...

Hey I really loved the poem . Its really deep. I liked the way it tells how first it gives hopes and then one understands that nothing stays and at ...

HEY I'm also a HARRY POTTER FAN. I loved your story how you added the characters from the previous era,and about how they faced the DARK LORD for the first ...

HII I liked the idea of your story which is about the harsh reality of the humans, who can do anything for their own needs.I look forward to see what ...

GOOD LUCK Hii Brenn!! I loved the idea where the poem revolves.I liked the way you presented your deep desire to find someone who could be by you side when ...

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Your verses are amazing, every metaphor is unambiguous and effective. You created a crescendo of images that seems to mirror the crescendo of your own emotions: it starts with your ...

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Dang, what an interesting poem. I can't totally pick apart each part of the poem, but when you said your poem was about society I really felt that. ESPECIALLY the ...

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Section 1, Stanza 1, Line 3: I was a little confused by the phrase “scrambled-egg mind”. It just seems really weird. What do you mean this phrase? Is there another ...