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Thank you for your kind words! I can see why you said it was too repetitive, at the beginning right? I've seen a couple people who say a lot of ...

Thank you! :D

This poem is dedicated to Justin W., for his strength, his commitment, and his happiness. Even when all was downhill, he always found a way to get back up again.

Two more thing! If you put all the chapters together at once, it's seems WAY too long and clustered. Instead, make this into a novel and create its own page ...

Bravo! This was absolutely beautiful! Best Buddies is a wonderful program! And I really think you should show her this; she would really be happy if you did. ^_^ Reading ...

Awww, this is so sad for the main character. Although, I really did liked this piece. I always thought--no--knew that you had feelings for me. This is the only sentence ...

Hmmm, this is actually pretty good, especially with the message you portrayed. Good job. Continue to explore new words and welcome to YWS!!

Amazing. Though brief, it says all it needs to say about what poetry is. BRAVO!

Oh, this is definitely a sad piece. This could actually be a good novel idea since it section can work as a scene. Although, I really love to know where ...

Yes, this is a very sweet poem. A girl can never resist a man who expresses his feeling through art and literature. Great job!

Just wonderful. The reason of beautiful art is through pain, and I think you've definitely captured that.

A wonderful start! I'd love to read more as well! It's very suspenseful, and your writing has a great edge to it. The italics really make it great. It's like ...