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She grabbed a small crystal container will an angel lid. will should be with. good job

Is this a true story?

how old is tylor? I'm not sure if he is old enough for cofee.

This sounds like a great idea. I cant wait to read it.

it sounds like a good story i think i'll read it.

Does seed stand for something?

I like these games, but I haven't played any of the games so i dont know about the powers. I'm more of a halo guy. :backtotopic: great job

[quote="Poltergiest"]It made you think but was simple at the same time.[quote] i find that as a great way to explain this poem.

Great job i really like it. I sang it in my head theres so many ways it can be sang :smt044

one question. What genre would you put this under? :smt044

I like it. Its good but its also kind of scary :smt044

very funny. You made me imagine Abe break dancing its really funny :smt044

great job i dont understand how in the story it says Lin Jee is greedy but he wont do the deal because of honor :smt044

wow that was great. not much action but the fights were funny and i know there will be more action in the next chapter

great job i couldn't find chpt 1 though i even checked you're portfolio pm me and tell me what happens please