Published August 22, 2007
The burns on my arm get better everyday
You should hate me now instead of helping me
I can be so stupid sometimes
I fall to the ground and cry in pain
As I take a flame and burn myself again
You ask why I’d do something like that
(Chorus)
I need someone to save me
From candle therapy
The flame of eternal hate
Before it’s too late
I’m so close to ending it all
Please, save me before I fall
I need you now more than ever
You say you love me
Don’t want to see me like this
But babe the truth is
(Chorus)
Save me
Save me
Candle therapy
Candle therapy
Stop me
Stop me
Before it’s too late
(Chorus x2)
Candle therapy…
It's still in the works. I'm constently making edits...
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I just do lyrics. I would sing, but I'm not too sure about it. My firend wanted me to write some songs for her band, so I did! If they need a singer, I'll volunteer, though.
I thought it was pretty cool. Is it a really song or just something you made up? If you ever make it for really I'd definatly want to hear it.
~Pol~
I like it. Its good but its also kind of scary