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Very good read, I was really impressed :) I actually chose to read this because it sounded like something different, which is cool!! :) So I started reading, and it's ...

Hi Gheala. I think with this version, you gave your characters even more depth and texture. I felt for them both, once again. This version is definitely better and I ...

Hi Gheala. As you know, I'm not one for nitpicking and commenting on grammar, so I'll stick to what I like, reading. By that, I mean, what I felt and ...

Got to say, Gheala- I'm glad you told me about this one. I just read through it and will start the review in a second but I have to say ...

I liked this a lot. Although, some of the lines could do with being more matched, syllable wise. I think that as you've made a nice cute poem that rhymes, ...

Hmmm, very mysterious -- I like that :) This is a good poem you have here. I liked it a lot. Although I would say: I feel Sad It was ...

I think it started out quite good but you lost it slightly near the end. One thing I didn't like though, and it actually doesn't matter, is that you've put ...

Oh wow, this is great and a perfect time to upload it too. I really can't tell you how good this is, there weren't any points I can make about ...

Hi, Gheala. I'm here to review. Unfortunately, I've never been that good at reviewing, so I'll do my best - since it's you :-) I loved it! I've got to ...

I really don't want to completely repeat what the other reviewers have just said but I actually might :/. I think the prologue is very interesting, but you unfortunately use ...

I actually really like this piece; sure you could have done with a better Syllable count on each line and in some parts the rhyming was a bit off but ...

Even me, who doesn't play cards too much could tell what this was about. This was about a girl, and you were rejected. I could seriously relate to this story ...

I've first got to say that I was quite pleasantly surprised by the story behind "The Tree". The whole idea was great and the metaphor you used was genius. As ...

really, really liked this. The flow was excellent and as i was reading the first few lines, i think i came across some rhyming too; but that might just be ...

Hi, Wicked. I have noticed that your other reviewers have mentioned this too, you need to put commas in where they are needed. There were a few other grammatical mistakes, ...