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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Cowboys

    Lol. Great minds think alike I guess.

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: "I've Seen a Little Fairy"

    'With A small bucket and A tiny brush" is what it should be. The line breaks don't feel quite right. It's all the things I said the last poem is. ...

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Collection of short poems

    You're welcome; I thought there was tons of meaning in these poems. It wasn't blatantly obvious, but in poems, the meanings aren't SUPPOSED to be blatantly obvious. These are all ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: The Man on the Stage

    Probably the first time my poems have ever been referred to as Shakespeare-like. Great review; thanks!

    Jul 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: The Man on the Stage

    I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review! :)

    Jul 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: The Man on the Stage

    Yeah; I put that line in as an afterthought; I should probably rework it to make more sense or take it out. Thanks for the advice!

    Jul 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Lyrical Re: The Man on the Stage

    Did you cry when Eponine cried? I cried. Love that movie too. Thank you so much for commenting, Olivia; the encouragement is great and that advice is awesome. Yes! I ...

    Jul 22, 2013
  • Lyrics » Spiritual, General Re: My Days

    In the line 'People saw "Where is He"?', the question mark needs to be moved inside the quotation marks. I know this is a nitpicky thing, but it's a change ...

    Jul 19, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Writers All

    I just wanted to say that this poem rocks. No one's ever written a poem about me before; I feel flattered. ;) In all seriousness though, I love this. You've ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    Thanks, Nargles! :)

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! Thanks for commenting and liking! :)

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    Thanks! :)

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    I'm glad you can relate to it! :) Thanks for commenting.

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    Thank you, Ally-wa! :) I don't know why I always capitalize the first letter of each line in poems; I think it's just habit. :)

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: I am No Hero

    Thank you for the advice! It was really helpful; I completely forgot to look at punctuation before posting.

    Jun 15, 2013


The beginning of wisdom is to call things by their right names.
— Chinese proverb