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Oh, that's good to know, thanks for clarifying. Make sure to let the reader know that in the context of the syory, because that's a great important detail, otherwise I ...

This review got me my first blue star!!! I'm super proud of that.

Lol, I do like the cutesy stuff, but I can handle creepy too. : )

Oh, that makes sense. I still think it could use a bit more explanation in the story though, but I like the detail.

Thanks for the feedback; I'll think about that line and what I could do differently.

Thank you!

I'm just going to review the title because I don't have much time. My favorite part of this poem is the title. There's something disjointed about it (in a good ...

Like usual, all your advice is spot-on. However, I have to disagree with you about the stanza breaks; it's supposed to reflect the title so that the first stanza is ...

Thanks for the review! Structure and line breaks are always my weak point in poetry; thanks for pointing those out. It was super helpful. :)

Viola Pride! 8)

I can relate to the frustrations mentioned in this piece, but I think part of the trouble is that you've got your steps in the wrong order. First, you have ...

Thank you so much for this review; it was incredibly helpful. I'll work on fixing those problem areas, especially the big info dump and the phrasing that doesn't sound right. ...

Thanks for your review; this was helpful and pretty good for a first review. A lot of times, people will write reviews with no negative comments, but those reviews aren't ...

I'm glad my review was helpful. :) This is why I love writing and reading- you begin to realize that other people feel/have felt the same things you're feeling, that ...

Thanks for the review. I edited the piece to make the characters' personalities more consistent. (Don't worry; I didn't get rid of the proposal; I'm just having it in a ...