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Thanks for your review!! Yes, I did intentionally experiment with a few of the stanzas in terms of length to try out a more freeform structure rather than a stricter ...

Thanks so much for your feedback! I did struggle a bit when coming up with descriptive terms in particular with this poem. I think I'm overthinking the actual writing process ...

Thank you for your feedback!!

Thank you so much for your review!! I really tried to emphasize the way betrayal and dishonesty are one and the same; there's a lot of heaviness within this poem.

Thank you so much!! Glad you liked it :)

Thanks for your review! I'll definitely consider indenting with my next piece that tends to be a little bit longer to see if it helps clean things up/make it smoother ...

Thank you for your very helpful review!! You pointed out a lot of little errors/inconsistencies that I'm going to go back and edit (serves me right for never proof-reading anything ...

Thank you very much for your review! I'm glad that my attempts at branching out in terms of descriptive terms is being well-received. It's always good to hear feedback on ...

Thanks for your review!! I'm relieved that you thought the title and description were interesting to read because those are oftentimes the parts of a poem that I struggle the ...

Thanks so much for your review! Wordiness/varying sentence structure is definitely an aspect of poetry and writing that I'll be working on. I'll definitely take a look at the PF ...

Thank you so much for your review!! The two quotes you pulled were actually the exact same spots that I struggled with writing and rewriting before I submitted it, so ...

Thank you so much for such an honest and helpful review! I struggled a lot with simply starting out the story to begin with, and it's no surprise to me ...

Thanks so much for your review!! That actually means a lot to me because I'm always self conscious about publishing any of my work.. Happy New Year to you too!!

Thank you for your review!!

Thanks so much for your review! I was nervous about posting my first short story (my first *completed* one, at least..) so I love receiving feedback. I appreciate the punctuation ...