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But childhood is gone, the present is here And you’re looking at adulthood, your heart gripped in fear hello ultraviolet. :) this moved me. just a few days ago i ...

This is the first time I wrote something even remotely visually romantic, so go ahead and cut it to pieces! xD It's for a contest and I need it to ...

My name is Estefani Delilah Jordann. I am 16 years old. I go to Seaside High School. Most people call me Essie. My halfway birthday is nine days away. My ...

HAHA. i read this while he was still typing it. i kinda like it, LOL, and i was a little jealous because he's got time for this stuff! looks like ...

Deep blackness consuming, Eyelids glued down Slip under my covers Slowly, so not to disturb Creatures that thrive in a six year old's mind Faintly breathing Courage sought out Eyes ...

Little Little Suzy puts on her shoes, looking pretty like little girls do: little Suzy , too young to know, that in a few years, they'll steal her hope. Little ...

welcome, julia. now, i have this question in the first line. is it really dove or "dive" ? cause i really don't get it being dove, though. or maybe you ...

S ass, and class with all that jazz, E veryday I’ll smile and wave R un and skip around with friends E njoying the fun that never ends N o ...

hello, serena. okay, so this it's nice but there are some things that bothered me. the previous comments mentioned capitalization already, so i won't talk about it anymore. To see ...

hello. i really loved this. i remembered our lesson in english last month..about a sick rose because of an invisible worm who slowly killed her, and the last rose of ...

hello. i love this simple but sweet poem. though, of course it 's unnecessary to write all the words beginning with capital letters. no further ado. keep it up. i ...

hello. i think this is pretty cool. i love the title, and i love the post because it is far from what the title is all about. i expected something ...

hi bowlove.. "what do i?" well, i think it's nice. just watch out for grammar and spelling. i think you should maintain the a-b-a-b type, or pattern. like this: What ...

midnight bliss! hi, i'm just curious why you named this Love's Devil Moon. it's a nice title, yes. :lol: i don't understand much about this part. Is her name Aisha? ...

hello, liadonwriter92.. 1940's is an age of wars, right? i think you had your story fine; the historical aspect, the characters.. but i have a few things to clarify. i ...