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okay wow what a way to metaphorically express what its like to lose someone and lose yourself because of it. first of all, this part was the part that made ...

yes mhm this is 'petrifyingly' attention-grabbing and i love the way you blended the final moments of life and the thought behind it. a small issue i want to point ...

yesss, this is a very mournful yet evocative poem and you established well with the way they feel about them dying or isolation. the structure of the poem is fantastic, ...

this is a very true story of peer pressure and social conformity. i like how you used second person perspective to tell us the hot mess of 'fitting in', and ...

hii! beautifully written poem here! My pounding heart begins to start My shaking arms and I fear there's no charms this part in your second stanza is where it made ...

hello! i was really immersed into your poem! you described the sensory details well and clear for readers to establish the world of grievance after a war. I feel like ...

the fact that i had to pause and think if this poem was real after i read it is insane. the way you emphasized how your cat brings you comfort ...

hii, this is a really well-written poem on panic attacks, and i feel like you developed that feeling very realistically raw. one thing that makes me pause a lot while ...