taytay0939

Hi, I'm glad to be your reviewer today, but I have to say that I am a bit nit picky. If I sound harsh I don't mean to be. :D ...

It was a good story, but it was very short. As your title says. Speaking of the title, you spelled story wrong. Okay, as I said, it is very short, ...

First of all let me say I love the story and I hope that you add on to it! :P On to the Nitpicks. "Help! Help!" she gurgled, sounding helpless ...

Hi, I'm Taytay. I'm going to give your story a quick reveiw. Once upon a time… So many children’s stories start that way, and so many end with the prince ...

Hey! I'm Taytay and I'm going to reveiw your story real quick! In the times that followed the Purges, all Mages lived in fear. First of all, let me just ...

I really liked your story and could only find one or two things that seemed like it could use correcting :D He embraced him. letting his tears drench his shoulder. ...

Funny! I like the way it shows that sirus is so bored that he is deciding which apple would be better to eat. :D Hilarious. You have really good writing ...

wow, you could be a great novelist! This story is hard to stop reading once you've started reading it!!! keep on writing them!! (i didn't find any mistakes, but i ...

wow, freaky, weird, amazingly described , and all of that!!!!! man you are a good writer!! :D :D

I really like the way it is so real. I can't really relate to anything except being short part. (but even that kinda sucks) but as I was saying, I ...

That was a very intriguing story. I really like the plot and how the ending is so "Too Be Continued" like. (thats a good thing) It really makes the reader ...

Wow, that was really deep. :D I'd say that it was really good!! (deffinatelly better than any of my haikus) You made it seem like a person who had given ...

I think that was a really good poem. Creepy, but in a good way (or is that even possible?) well if its not you just possible! :D Of course I ...

I really liked the story, it was really good, especially for a first time romance. I didn't notice any errors myself, but that may have just been because i was ...

First of all, the opening wasn't the best you could have done. it wasn't horrible, but you could have thought of something better. Also, you keep on repeating yourself. An ...