talkingbird

thanks! actually poetry traditionally is supposed to have the first letter of every line capitalized, but it's optional if it's contemporary; it's kind of just a habit for me, i ...

Wow. This was simply amazing. That is all!

Ah I know... I've been trying to work on it, sorry! The choppiness was kind of intentional though... because for the last two weeks I've been really disoriented and dazed ...

Thanks! Really? Whenever I don't capitalize I get a million comments from people saying I should! I personally don't like the way it looks either but people kept on telling ...

Thanks! I actually really agree with your suggestions, I'll play arous with it :)

Thanks, guys!

Wow, this has to be my favorite poem I've read today. I like how the style reflects the shattered mirror. The message in this poem is so true an relatable... ...

Thanks! Yeah, I wasn't sure why I used shattered now that I think about it, but crumpled works a lot better! I changed textbooks, too. I'll definitely work on the ...

Thank you! It actually started out as a short story than it just grew into this haha. I'm almost done with the next part, I've been having sort of a ...

Thanks! Yeah, i was a little worried about the rhyme even as I wrote it, but i couldn't really find a way around and htat one line was kind of ...

Thanks guys! :) No, your review was really helpful, I wasn't so sure about the bread crumbs part, so I'm glad someone mentioned it. and yup, I've been working on ...

Ok--THANKS. I'm really glad I'm not just portraying eating disorders as a girl who wants to be skinny and counts calories, my goal was to show the more emotianal side ...

Thanks for your reviews! Yeah, I have been trying to clean it up, I'm still working on it. And OK, paintingtherain, I have absolutely no idea where the repeated word ...

Of course! It's about a girl, who's been "broken", she feels sad and lost and is actually supposed to have a bunch of other issues, but I didn't really want ...

Thank you! I took out the small font, but I'm still trying to figure out how to explain 'this' without it disrupting the flow, as it would seem really intense ...