talkingbird

I really loved that! I thought it was short but great :) My only thing is also the lack of punctuation and capitalization. I think if you're not going to ...

WHOA that was really good. haha i wish i could write like tat :) I love this part: music laves her days like a horizon laves another horizon, as it's ...

I agree with the review above but still i read this and i was immediatly though oh my god, i wish i could write like that :) I especially liked ...

I really liked that! You didn't need to give the definitions though... well at least for me also i thought the line break after dank was a little awkward, i ...

I actually really like it, but this isn't exactly short and sweet. I feel like it really needs to be part of a longer piece. The style is really nice ...

Wow, the imagery is FANTASTIC. I really like the story it tells, too. I love the get up and run parts, don't really know why. The first part is my ...

Holy djidoalsksmd. That was really good. And I won't pick at your punctuation, you already caught that. My only thing is that I feel like there are some excess words, ...

I have one question... Is 'you' supposed to be referring to the ED? Because the part about the tombstone I think would make more sense if you said "will they ...

Wow. This is amazing, i almost cried :(. I loved the part about your eyes being cloudy and simple answers, and my favorite is the part about aging a decade ...

That was incredible. Wow. Just a few things, though: I would reword the part about The back porches for smoking, it seems a little out of place. And also the ...

Ok, I'm commenting on all of your work :) but you're just REALLY good. And just wondering, have you read wintergirls? This reminds me a lot of the book... I'm ...

That was SO good. Oh my god, I could feel the excitement and nervous energy and blind, jittery happiness. Wow. It flowed reallyyyy well. I loved the part that goes ...

I personally like the lack of formality (though some things could be fixed... which is mentioned above). I feel like it stylistically adds to the tone, which by the way ...

The voice is very believable! Like, as I was reading this I definitely got the feeling of the character. But in the beginning I didn't realize that he was ben ...

Thirteen Reasons Why by Jay Asher. It may not have been the best writing one might have seen, but the story is so touching. It's a depressing book, but Jay ...