sweethearts

I really liked chapter one and i want to read more. It was a little short for me but maybe because i wanted to read more :) As an interested ...

I quite like your title and the whole theme with the props. Your story really communicated important messages such as family relationships and drugs, alcohol etc. To be honest, i ...

Noelle, i think it was a great chapter! True, it is short but it adds to the suspense to story and makes the reader want to read more! However i ...

I was really captured by the title of this piece of poetry, but when i read it, i was really amazed at the extensive vocabulary you used. Maybe I'm just ...

Hey Noelle, I thought it was an amazing follow up on chapter one and i loved reading every single bit of it! You have used so much description to show ...

I think what you wrote here is very correct and your advice to high school students is very helpful since it is based on your own experiences. there isn't much ...

I think that you have written a really beautiful and emotive poem here. I am not sure what your meaning was in this poem but the way i interpreted it ...

Amazing. I thought it was very expressive and emotional. i absolutely loved reading it and i would want to read more of these poems. i was wondering if some typos ...

this is a beautiful piece of poetry you have written here. you use a lot of imagery which adds to the tense atmosphere you created. I love the last three ...

You have written an interesting composition and you have made good use of literary techniques such as repetition. However a good suggestion is to polish it a little because too ...

hey, wow, you have written an interesting story here, with lots of twists and suprises! You had a few typos in your short story and i wasn't very sure if ...

i think this is a very sweet story and i am looking forward to your posts. i think though that you have to add more suspense into your story and ...

i really enjoyed reading your short story. to start off, you really captivated your audience with a bold and descriptive beginning of the setting. you really conveyed your message of ...

i think that it is a beautiful and illustrative peom. i really liked reading it and i think you are a great poet. it is a great collection of metaphors ...