sunstarfrozenlife

I'm a girl and the moment I read it I recognized it as making fun of the fact that people think men are better than women. Personally I thought it ...

Hero, I just wanted you to know you don't have to apologize to iheartbooks or whatever. Although I am a Christian and I have many friends who are Christians, I ...

That's beautiful, FQ! I loved it! And, for the first time, I only have one thing to nit-pick at! Well doen! A mother is like the wind Cool and comforting ...

Overall, very interesting. Just a few capatilization problems that drove me nuts while reading it. If I capatilized something for you, I'll put it in italics. I force open my ...

First of all, AWESOME! Only one quick grammar prob: [quote="ninjacookiemonster" Griffin looked down at Ella. "I miss your eyes." he said simply.[/quote] That made no sense. He misses her eyes? ...

I thought it was great, first of all. A true work of art. Since it's a preview, I won't say too much about this, but note- you might want to ...

First of all, I loved it. Emotion rolled through the entire piece. I could feel her heart breaking in a sense... wow, it was really good. Now down to the ...

Great prologue! I really enjoyed reading it, just like all your other writings. ;) Just a few things I should probably mention since last time I got told off because ...