sunlightwarriorxo

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for your review! :)

Thank you for your review! :)

Thank you for your review! :)

Thank you for your review! :)

Hi, Wow this is a truly beautiful poem. I love the emotions and imagery that you've used. It truly captures the dimensions and feeling of a friendship. To be honest ...

Hi, so this is my first rewrite, what do you think?

Hi, These are an interesting collection of poems. You definitely have some really interesting ideas, however personally, its not clear where the imagery and themes are going, maybe this could ...

Thank you so much for the review! This is a first draft, so these critiques will be extremely helpful for polishing and refining the piece. Zak is meant to be ...

Thank you for the review - this is a first draft there's a lot of polishing that I need to do so this critique will be veru helpful :)

What a fantastic work. I love to the use of A. It really brings the feeling and emotion to life. Please do continue with your works :))

This is an fantastic poem - I love the imagery and the emotion threads that you've used that carry on well throughout the poem.

This is so beautiful - you are a very talented songwriter! Made me cry 😢 Keep writing :)