summerlovee

This would be a good song (: Just one thing "don't you dare fall" that didn't work with me but you choose also try to put in more other verses ...

This poem exactly describes how i feel and probably alot of other girls ! I love how you took a realistic thing in society and put it in a poem ...

I never read anything so short and direct but yet still convey the same feelings as others that are longer ! This is excellent :P

O_o this was soo good im so shocked someone can come up with this xD your so talented at writin poetry so don't stop (:

This is really good (: i enjoyed reading it and i realy suck at poetry so i don't know how you can find a rhyming word for each xD Kepp ...

This would be a good ballad with the rhythm and everything. Just one thing "missing-you weather" this didn't really work with me but its your choice (: Overall its really ...

i think this was good, (americans dont kill me) because it was sincere and although it was kinda talking about the minority of the population i think you expressed your ...

this was a beautiful poem, but of course reality for you (: uhh just one thing i picked up i think during the start you used ' she couldn't cope' ...