Published February 18, 2011
DON'T FORGET
Hold on, just hold on
Just for a little while longer
Don't fall, don't you dare fall
The stars have no claim on you yet
Chorus:
Never forget that you shine bright
Don't forget that I'm by your side
Use me for what you need
As long as you shine bright
Hold up for a moment
Put down the knife
Breathe in, just breathe
You are brighter than the stars
Chorus:
Never forget that you shine bright
Don't forget that I'm by your side
Use me for what you need
As long as you shine bright
Bridge:
Light up, light up
Don't let the darkness consume you
Louder, louder
So the stars will know who you are
Chorus:
Never forget that you shine bright
Don't forget that I'm by your side
Use me for what you need
As long as you shine bright
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DON'T FORGET
Hold on, just hold on
Just for a little while longer
Don't fall, don't you dare fall
The stars have no claim on you yet
Chorus:
Never forget that you shine bright
Don't forget that I'm by your side
Use me for what you need
As long as you shine bright
Hold up for a moment
Put down the knife
Breathe in, just breathe
You are brighter than the stars
Chorus:
Never forget that you shine bright
Don't forget that I'm by your side
Use me for what you need
As long as you shine bright
Bridge:
Light up, light up
Don't let the darkness consume you
Louder, louder
So the stars will know who you are
Chorus:
Never forget that you shine bright
Don't forget that I'm by your side
Use me for what you need
As long as you shine bright
I love this song and can get the emotion from it really clearly
but try adding a few more words to each verse. I mean if you look at other song lyrics from professionals you'll see the lyrics stretched out longer.
Get a beat to it and i swear I'd listen to it all day =) =D!!
This would be a good song (:
Just one thing "don't you dare fall" that didn't work with me but you choose
also try to put in more other verses in between
other than that this was really good (: