summerlovee

Hello :) To answer your question, yes the no-man's land is meant to be a reference to the war thing. I used it to symbolise how even with the constant ...

Ahhh thank you so much for this helpful criticism, I probably should've made a second draft with this one. I will try to tweak a few things :)

Thank you for reading it :)

Hello :) I really like the raw emotion that came out of this poem, I can feel the desperation. My favorite line is: 'I am trapped in my anxiety, Or ...

I really love this poem. It has a real vulnerable feel to it and I can feel every word that forms this poem, I don't know how else to describe ...

I really really love this poem. I loved the message it conveyed and it had a great flow to it. Thank you for sharing it. :)

Hello :) Thankyou for your constructive criticism (I will most definitely start fixing some stuff up) and your compliments! And thankyou for the awesome rating you had given this piece. ...

Hello fellow ninja member! :p Thankyou so much for this review, you gave me some really good advice and I will fix up the areas that need a little bit ...

Yep, pretty sure epic is still a thing :p I was thinking about including it in a story...hmm I should start writing the piece. And thankyou so much for this ...

Thank you so much for your kind review! :)

Thankyou for your review and no I haven't read Fahrenheit 451, now you've got me curious about this book. :p Although, I admit a major part of this story was ...

Thankyou so much for your review! Ah, yes I did mean to say 'me', now I'm embarrassed that mistake went unnoticed when I edited this. :P Again, thankyou. :D

I really love this poem! The images that were painted in my head by your use of imagery were just incredible and for me, I particularly love the last stanza. ...

Thanks guys so much for taking your time and reviewing this, I will fix my poem ASAP :)

That was a good story :), really casual. One question though are you a Journey fan or do you watch Glee?