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Re: Rainstorm
Hello :) I really liked these lyrics and I enjoyed reading through it and I may or may have not created my own beat to it (I'm pretty sure it ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Pressing Through
Hello! I did enjoy reading the lyrics to this song and although I am more of a lyrics person that a beat one, it was kinda strange to read lyrics ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Old soul.
Hello :) I really liked this poem! The main theme that was explored in this poem reminded me of the spoken word piece called "Look Up". Anyways, when I read ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Midnight Piano
Hello! :) First off I would like to say thank you for reviewing both my works, your feedback were very kind and yay to being united by the black dot ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Afterlife
Wow. This was incredible. When I finished reading this, the first thought that had popped up in my head was 'The Book Thief' as it was the first book I ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Silver Wolves
(I'm going to be reviewing as I read, so think of it like a live review :p) Oh I like the banner thing at the top of the piece. I ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Title unknown.
Oh this looks interesting! When I had first read it, I was about the comment on the very short sentences and how although the plot looks interesting, the lack of ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: The Day Will Come
Okay I have read the first few sentences and although I have no doubt that the storyline is really interesting, the writing seemed every unpolished. There is a lack of ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Nothing Hurts
I really really like this poem! Honestly, it was short yet it expressed the feeling of being utterly hopeless during a heartbreak. I liked how at the end of the ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: I Am No Poet, But I Have Things To Say
Wow. This poem was amazing. I wish I could write like you because you took the feelings I couldn't quite grasp and I couldn't form the words to structure even ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: Forbidden
Wow, This story was so good! The end was sad and I actually think that Ethan's reaction wasn't agonized enough, seeing as he just lost his true love ;) I ...
Dec 8, 2011 -
Re: Sometimes, chapter Twenty
I have spent the last 2 hours reading all the chapters all over again and squealing over each scene with her and Aiden! Sorry I prefer her with Aiden :L ...
Oct 17, 2011 -
Re: We Lie in Ruin
Hey there! I really loved your story :D It was great and very entertaining, I have no complaints. I like how with your main character's thoughts you convince the audience ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: I hate my father
Ok I get this is meant to be emotional but this is too fast paced, I mean it doesn't describe anything. Also I don't think a father would say 'babe' ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Seven Months.
This is just truly touching and sad and a lot more I read it and it was beautiful then i read the last paragraph and read it all over again, ...
Apr 4, 2011
