summergrl13

Thank you, honestly that's helpful :)

Thank you! Darn, every time I submit the formatting gets messed up haha. That and a couple other parts were meant to be italicized, but they'll be fixed soon. Hmm, ...

Thank you, I think I will do that.

Thanks, that's actually really helpful. I was debating between writing it as prose or a poem actually, and just went with a poem because it came quickly. I probably will ...

Thank you! I edited it and changed the line.

Thank you so much!

I love this! Short and sweet, makes you think but it's not overloaded with emotion or overkill. Perfect satire. Nice job!

No problem :) you've got great potential!

Thanks!

Thank you!

Thank you!

Thank you! Yes, a helm is just a kind of helmet for armor :)

Thank you so much! Your advice helped :)

Thank you! I think the line breaks really did help!

Awww thank you so much!