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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Friends Breakup Short

    Hiiii !!! This is my first time here on your page ..... not disappointed at all. The details in your writing got me hooked like a fish . Great job ...

    Sat Jul 03, 2021 12:52 am
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: That One Time We Technically Became Pirates Part 1

    Hey HarryHardy ! I hope you're doing well. I title got me hooked like a fish . I wait to read the series coming ...patiently ! I hope to see ...

    Sat Jul 03, 2021 12:28 am
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: That One Time We Technically Became Pirates Part 1

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    Hey HarryHardy ! I hope you're doing well. I title got me hooked like a fish . I wait to read the series coming ...patiently ! I hope to see ...

    Sat Jul 03, 2021 12:28 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Was the Epoch of Belief

    I liked this ,very timely !

    Sat Jul 03, 2021 12:16 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Him

    He blew my "type" of the water - THIS PART ... so good . Every details ,I got hooked like a gold earring . Good Job !

    Thu Jul 01, 2021 5:21 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Was the Season of Light

    "For indeed with hardship will be ease " - This sentence for me was like a wall ,beautifully backed by the details !

    Thu Jul 01, 2021 4:51 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Was the Season of Light

    "For indeed with hardship will be ease " - This sentence for me was like a wall ,beautifully backed by the details !

    Thu Jul 01, 2021 4:51 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Day Mares

    The details ,details ,details, details ..... beautifully written !

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 9:01 pm
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Echoes

    This was good .... the whole experience that you took to write and it made the reader go on this visual ride .Stunning !

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 8:59 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Ch. 7) Rory

    This is beautifully written ,seriously the writers blue print rules ..... show not tell -you have mastered it .Every details !

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 8:56 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Unworthy wave

    This message hits home.I just was watching a video I made 3 years about how unhappy I was at that moment ."I want a better life " is so relatable ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 8:54 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Unworthy wave

    This message hits home.I just was watching a video I made 3 years about how unhappy I was at that moment ."I want a better life " is so relatable ...

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 8:54 pm
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    Wed Jun 30, 2021 8:47 pm
  • » Re: Why I Never Celebrated My Country Independence Day (First Celebration)

    Wed Jun 30, 2021 8:47 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Think twice before you hit send

    Hi there The title got me here! your writing skills are overtop ,I was totally locked in . But I would like to know what is she up to now ...

    Sat Dec 19, 2020 8:47 pm


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