stygianmoon17

ohhh okay I thought you meant you were totally scrapping the whole universe's idea

Noooo I was actually waiting for you to tell me it was a prologue. Seriously, the idea is really good, there are just one or two plot holes you need ...

Thanks !! I actually found the poem after hours of research on google, then I just colour arranged it :D For the stanza that was rushed, are you talking about ...

Thanks you so much for the review, it means a lot :D

Hey there !! Thanks a lot for the review :D For the "eyes could not capture the beauty of nature", it basically means only the heart can. But by eyes, ...

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hey there ! This was a great little short to read, I was invested along the way and just loved how things are starting to develop and really, I found ...

hi there :D thanks for the review ! this is a blackout poem so I kinda couldn't decide where to place each word lol, but basically, you just have to ...

thanks a lot for the review :D this actually does come from a mashup of two texts, I'm not sure which one as I just found it out of text ...

argh sorry I didn't realise it was this hard to read 😓

Congrats for first place in the spotlight !! This is such a lovely poem, totally deserves it

true true. I had no idea Southerners said that lol, that's hilarious xD I'll try and review all the chapters after this one but I'm kinda lazy ^^

It did help, but sometimes it's better to let the reader uncover what's behind it :D I don't really get what's "secure the position" tho..

ikr !! kinda long tho

eee this came out great :DDD