strawberrypop13

Wow... this is so good! It really sums up love, every aspect of it, from the crazy to the normal, right through. :) I can't see any obvious spelling or ...

Wow! I am a big fan of comical poetry (although I can't write it at all XD ) and this was absolutely amazing! I couldn't find anything wrong with it, ...

Wow.. this poem is so beautiful! It tells the story really well, and doesn't go overboard on imagery or description like some poems tend to do. You kept it at ...

Wow... this poem is so good! There are no grammar or spelling mistakes that I can see, and it flows really well. It's quite a strange and unexpected poem, but ...

Hi! I must say, I think this is really beautiful. I love the words you use, especially the really descriptive ones that are almost extinct in writing nowadays, sadly. One ...

This is so good! I actually can't find any bits I don't like, although I agree with purplegirl14 about the capitals at the starts of lines. I think that this ...

Hey olubunni! I thought that your poem was quite good, but I think that it has some points that could do with improving. Firstly, I agree with TheNewHero as to ...

Hi! I must say, I thought that this poem was really good! I loved the description, and think that it is a brilliant idea for a poem. This really made ...

Hi WaitingForLife! I thought that this poem was really beautiful; there was a lot packed into it but it worked well. I agree with niapitts about it being over-the-top in ...

Hi Elinor Brynn! I thought that your poem was fabulous, but it needed a few tweaks :) But does it matter? You still look marvelous -- there's that twinkle in ...

Goodness, what a fab poem! I was very surprised by the ending, but it's very clever :) I liked the way you went into detail about the 'contact' between you ...

I really like this poem! It is very strong and powerful, and runs very smoothly. Some of the words were quite gentle, such as 'daft', so you might want to ...

Wow... this is such a wonderful poem! It's short and concise, and really well spoken. It runs smoothly and conveys a strong meaning which I'm sure everyone has felt at ...

wow this is very beautiful! it's very touching. I like how there are no capital letters, and I must say, it runs pretty smoothly and is very sad :( I ...