stevebayor

Hey... This poem is amazing. I did really enjoy reading it. The punctuations and word choices were on point . The imagery was vivid. I like the buildup from the ...

Well-done Em16. This was an interesting piece. It was beautiful to read and I feel every teenager will relate effortlessly. I particular liked the imagery, the metaphors were vivid and ...

This is an interesting piece. I like the imagery, and the message was well passed across. It's colorful, it's real in every sense of the word. However, i think it ...

Hey Introworded, I just can't pass by without dropping a little review.. First observation: I like your title, one of the most important elements of any poem is the kind ...

Hello Eros... I really enjoyed the poem, i liked the flow and the rhymes. The Imagery created here is quite fascinating as it is possible to visualize the events taking ...

Hello Lives4Christ24 I am impressed with the simplicity and flow of this piece. The diction was directed at all kinds of audience, and it was not ambiguous or difficult to ...

wao charlotte! this is an amazing piece of work. i totally love the flow, the rhythm is on point and the rhyme scheme is lit! i've been looking forward to ...

this is absolutely amazing, you portrayed how important this person is to you in a beautifully structured manner, i love the rhymes, makes me feel like i'm singing if i ...

wao! Absolutely amazing work, it's very beautifully composed. The choice of words are perfectly made and poetically used. you were able to pass across the message about who you love ...

hi, i'll be attempting a review of your poem if you don't mind..well i seem not to to see any serious connection between the title of the poem and the ...

hi, i'm stevebayor and i'll be attempting a review of your piece. this poem is quite interesting, it's emotive. i like the way it's detailed, i could relate with it ...

well, i guess you have a beautiful idea, and an awesome intention but there seems to be some little hiccups. The punctuation and progression from one line to the other ...