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Sorry I didn't finish. My computer isn't working very well right now. I will create part II soon so don't worry its not going to be left like this! =D

This is great! Though sometimes there a few typo but I'm glad you chose to write about this topic. I used to have a best friend but she backstabbed me.

Okay one last post this is NOT all of chapter one so yeah its longer than this

So thought provoking and deep, it touched me because I have felt those feelings before. (In the past I have struggled with depression and eating disorders I am now staying ...

I kind of disagree with that which is just my opinion, you did a great job!!

Thanks for the advice and I agree with you 100% I will write a second draft soon, this was just to see see whether people liked it or not.

Thanks for the advice and I agree with you 100% I will edit it like right now!

Let me finish... Part of the story is based on my story.

This is the first draft so not the best but I can accept criticism it helps me become a better writer! Part