starlitskies

I love this~ Very unique, it's interesting and somewhat peculiar to think about how much shoes go through in a day. Some of the other commenters had issues with the ...

Hello there! (: I really like this poem. I love the message and how the pen can be taken literally and figuratively. Each line is very unique and adds something ...

Very nice! As a follower myself I can completely relate to this. It seems the moment life grows darker we are quick to forget about our God. The rhythm is ...

This is lovely! I, like everyone else who has reviewed, love the usage of a paper girl as a metaphor. You conveyed your image in a very straightforward manner while ...

Hello there, I'm here to review your poem. ^^ I really like this, it has wonderful imagery and smooth transitions between the style changes. You touched on many aspects of ...

Hello there, I'd love to give you a review on your poem. ^^ First of all, I absolutely love the opening/closing stanzas. They bring the poem closed very efficiently while ...