starlitmind

Hey there! Welcome to YWS :D I hope you're enjoying it so far! Ooh, so it definitely seems like there are some secrets to be uncovered in this story. I ...

Hey there! Like IconspicuoslyAlpacaing said, this is quite a lovely poem, especially when you haven't written in months. I enjoyed your imagery in descriptions. The contrasts between summer and winter

Hey there! I'm here to review another one of your chapters :D Like your other chapters, you have pretty good descriptions in here! I think the one main thing that ...

Hey there! I haven't read the first chapter, but this has less than two reviews, so here I am! I think you have a pretty good story here! You have ...

Hey there! I'm here to review another one of your chapters :D I like your imagery in here as well. You seem to be pretty good at describing things! I ...

Hey there! I haven't read you other chapters, but this has less than two reviews, so here I am! While reading, I noticed that you have pretty good imagery, especially ...

Hey, whatchamacallit! You've reviewed so many of my poems, so it's about time to return the favour! I'm honestly a bit intimidated to review one of yours, but here we ...

Hey, Magebird! I decided to stop by to review another beautiful poem of yours. To be honest, I’m a bit intimidated to review one of your poems, but I’ve decided ...

Hey there! Old story, but has less than two reviews, so here I am! I really like this story! Everything about it seems natural, especially your dialogue. I think you ...

Hey there! Old poem, but has less than two reviews, so here I am :D I love this! It's simple but that simpleness is what I really like about it. ...

Hey there! This is old but has less than two reviews, so here I am :D I think this poem has a good topic and idea. I feel that everyone ...

Hey there! This is an old poem, but it has less than two reviews, so here I am :D (also, did you mean to save this as a poem, not ...

Hey there! This is an old poem, but has less than two reviews, so here I am :D I really love this poem! The rhymes are simple but steady, and ...

Hey there! I'm here to review another one of your poems! c: I think this is my favourite so far. You have such beautiful lines and phrases and comparisons. I ...

Hey there! I'm here to review another one of your poems :D I do like some of your phrases and imagery. You definitely have some interesting way of describing things ...