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how dare you kill pinkeyes :( Graypaw's eyes swelled with grief as Quickflash dragged Pinkeyes's limp body into camp. NOOOOOO HOW COULD YOU??!?!?!?!?! Ripplepaw and Mothear followed, neither of them ...

um excuse me, two deaths, my heart is not prepared for this "Tawnybird wasn't lying," Quickflash gasped as she stared at the Sunningrocks. The entire course of the river had ...

Hello, there! ^_^ I love reviewing your works, so I decided to drop by and leave one on this piece as well! c: I'll start with reading it and sharing ...

Hello, Maple!! ^_^ I always love reading your poetry, and I wanted to stop by and leave a review on this lovely piece! This review will probably be on the ...

Note: Yes, I know the pacing isn't great. Please review other parts of it. Okay, so today I'm going to focus my review on your pacing. First of all, NO ...

HELLO I AM HERE Rain water gushed over the edge of the camp as Riverpaw helped Halfface crawl over the reed barrier towards the forest. I like how many tiny ...

Ooh, a revised version, sounds awesome! c: I'll check out your poem at a later time, probably this weekend if I get the chance “I heard that a few strangers ...

OKAY SO APPARENTLY I started the first chapter awhile ago, but I just stopped? xD I don't remember the last part honestly, but hopefully reading this will jog my memory! ...

Hello! ^_^ First off, welcome to YWS! personifying particles here works really well, and it added some flair to this c: The light kissed the mist lingering in the air ...

Hello, there! ^_^ I always enjoy reading your works, so I saw this in the literary section and wanted to check it out! I'll just share you my thoughts as ...

I hope this review can still be helpful, even if I haven't read the original series

HELLO HELLO! it gives the poem a sense of power, firm stance, and completion. I hope to read more from you soon, and I hope this helped!

HELLO I LOVE REVIEWING YOUR WORKS so I hope you don't mind me here! ^_^ I realized I never read this, and it's a collab, so it SOUNDS AWESOME!! I'll ...

You are making my days awesome with churning out these chapters, I really appreciate you :') "Magic," the Belecthorian replied without giving it a second thought. He paused nervously and ...

I AM HERE AND VERY EXCITED TO READ THE NEXT PART AND ALSO VERY HUNGRY Apparently Americans were practically sold to oil and gas conglomerates and pretty much against solar ...