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I really liked this. It's what I wish I could say to some people but don't have the heart to do it. I would have to agree with the review ...

Sad poem. But very well written. If there was one thing I want to say it would be it's not really narrative poetry because it kind of tells a story ...

Beautiful. It's simple yet sweet and gets your point across. I love it! And I think there are plenty of people that can relate. I think this is meant to ...

Sweet! I'm featured! It's only five likes, but I don't care! This just made my week! I've never been featured before!

Thanks. I was beginning to think no one was going to give me a review for this. The first one I did was all one part and it was bad. ...

Thanks guys. Wow, I actually wrote something where no one had anything to say negative about it except my grammar? I'm so happy! I'm glad you guys liked it.

Okay. I'll have to look into those. And might I suggest adding your chapters to a novel so they're all connected? And that way you can give your reader the ...

Beautiful. And if that's you singing you have an amazing voice. And to write this at only fourteen is amazing! Keep it up and I hope to hear more.

Thanks guys. Yeah I know I have issues with comma use. It's something I'm trying to work on. Thanks for all the tips. I'll have to go through it when ...

Thanks. I wasn't trying to make it sound like I had low self-esteem though. I just tend to compare myself to others a lot. I know that's not good, but ...

I love it. You did a great job with describing what was going on, I felt like I was really there. I know it's just the first part, so we ...

Oh and by the way, Rayneisthename, this type of poem is actually called an Ottava Rima. You start with eight syllables and then take one away each time, eventually going ...

What I meant by knobs is door knobs, you know because the person has to work and turning doornobs is my idea of her working because she's moving alot? And ...

Ha, ha. You already figured it out. That makes it so much easier.

You would probably think that because of how the media uses a parody. Like Weird Al or Vietaman Princess. Those are parodys, but they're only a form of them. Your ...