stargazer9927

This was beautiful and it was a great story. A lot of people feel like this. The only negative thing I would have to say about it would be it ...

I think this is a great idea but it needs a lot of work. I'll start by saying the whole thing was a bit confusing. You attempted to sum everything ...

Once again, great:) My dearest Robin. I’ll protect you with my life, Robin, with my whole being. From all the centuries I’ve lived, I’ve never met a woman as amazing ...

I loved this! It had humor, adventure, and romance all in one! And your writing was amazing! I hate Twilight, so let's hope this interests me more, and so far ...

I would suggest developoing your character a little more. I think you have a good start, but I don't really feel like I know him. Detail is extremely important. Like ...

Amazing! I must say I love your writing! I couldn't really find any nit pits with your writing because you seemed so good at it! I would have to say ...

Beautiful poem. I could really feel some of your emotions into this, as if it had actually happened to you personally. I only caught one mistake: Your a traitor This ...

I love the plot line of this. I have a close family member with this condition so I can totally relate to it. Although he acts a bit different than ...

First things first. I have to say this to a lot of the younger people, but remember to click on the "story" button at the bottom of the page when ...

That's kind of cool that you were able to do that with just six words. Perhaps I should try this:) I think it was a great poem, but I would ...

Might I just say I love your writing. You have that good writing that I actually want to read and doesn't bore me to death. I only found a few ...

I've never read any of your chapters before this but I'll go ahead and review this anyway because I caught on to what was going on pretty fast. The main ...

Okay, first things first: you need to click on the "story" format when you post it so that it won't look like a big clump of text and will be ...

I'm having a hard time seeing the rhyme scheme. But I do think it's a wonderful poem and I personally don't think you should take the parts in the green ...

If I might just make a suggestion. I'm not sure what contest this was for and maybe it had to be in a certain format for that contest but in ...