spottedpebble

I'll say it first thing: this poem makes me feel guilty about all my notebooks sitting in drawers right now. How I have interpreted this poem: Someone got a new ...

So much alliteration! This alliteration jubilee has such good imagery. The way you described everything helped me picture it so well. I can taste the pumpkin spice, the pies and ...

This is perfect advice! Every writer who is stuck should try just rambling. I like how you said: If you don't begin by rambling, will you ever get anywhere? If ...

[center]Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This is a story about a girl named Emily who spread a rumour ...

Your dialogue is very strong, and really helps me follow the story better. I like how you started out the story with "I am currently running late on an important ...

I hope you keep writing this, because I want to see where it goes! I like the different phrases you use to describe things. They really give me a feel ...

This poem is like a reflection of my own thoughts sometimes. I like the way this poem flows and how it's written in free verse. The way you have frased ...

First off, welcome to YWS! I also joined today. I can tell a lot about your style of writing poetry since you published a collection with three poems in it. ...

I can't believe this is only one of your first poems! Your formatting is perfect and your rhyme scheme is great! I did see that you rhymed some of the ...

Your descriptions are so amazing and original! "like a solemn pool of liquid silver|adorning the inky skies,|glittering more than a million gems,|it is She who heard my cries." has such ...

This poem really speaks to me. I hope someday I can learn how to "cut up past pain and scatter it behind me." I love how you repeated the way ...

I understand why your username is Lullaby. This poem is soft and sweet while being haunting at the same time. The way you described the fog made me feel like ...

This poem is beautiful. The last two lines are what really gets me. :) Your rhyming is perfect and the way you used your words is powerful. I can really ...