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Okay, thanks. I'll fix those things.

Oh, lol, sorry!

o.O Harsh much?

Wow, It's very good. You did a great job with the rhyming, except for line 5 and 6, they don't rhyme. But overall, still a very very nice poem. Keep ...

Thanks! :D

Thanks, be sure to check out the 5 parts before this one.

Good job. It's a bit of a tongue twister, I even stumbled over a few words.

Very good. The spacing between lines makes me feel like I am gasping for air as I read. You are very good at writing poetry. ~Spirit

Excellent. I have read a lot of your poetry, and when I read it, I can feel the strong emotions you are feeling when you write. Keep up the good ...

This is what Goliath looks like:

Edited!

I like Stephenie Meyer alot, but you gotta admit, that was pretty funny. :D

Hey, good job! There were a few spelling mistakes I found, like Witch instead of which, but that was pretty much it.

Thanks for telling me about those mistakes, I will edit them sometime this week when I find the time.

Okay, ummm, well they are letting her go around freely because there aren't any horses out(besides Darrius and his small herd) but Darrius's herd was over the fence, and they ...