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I like the writing, first off. It has an easy flow which I think is priority in a poem [for me anyway n_n]. And I like the whole idea, particularly ...

This. Is. So. Freaking. Cute. n_n I really like the flow too, something others have mentioned, but they only said that because it's true. I like the way you didn't ...

Boyfriend Gatorade Fights Unbeknownst to many people, Gatorade tastes bad on purpose. Yet, this neon-hued, slimy, not-juicy-nor-watery substance that is advertised as athlete sweat, and happens to sur

Hey there :D I have to say ultimately it was a good read, and although the story line is pretty simple, putting it into poetry worked really well here. I ...

This is certainly very simple, but I really like it. That's all I can really say about the matter. :D You can see the image, it's not smothered in big ...

Math is so dumb. Anyway, of course, I dig the poem. It expressed my hate-filled thoughts perfectly, which is of course, the ultimate proof that math is, in fact, evil. ...

TEEHEE! *giggles uncontrollably then controls laughter, proceeding to chuckle gently and then types some more* OK, so a few things. One; funny. I dig it. I think it has a ...

Alrighty! :D I think this story is a great one. Kudos to you for being able to bring your characters to life in such a limited time. I've read too ...

I feel contrary to the other reviews, haha. Ultimately, I loved it. Surprisingly so, too since I'm usually pretty picky with the type of poetry I enjoy. Perhaps I'm biased, ...

Greetings! All summed up, I think you have a lot of good going on here, and I'm not just being nice. There is a lot of technical things you do ...

Well, there's really very little I can say negatively about this. As mentioned before, the first thing I could consider was the apparent ease of your writing! It doesn't give ...

Aw, shucks, this is just like my life right now. Basically, within a second I knew how adorable this was, and I loved it throughout. [I'm a real fan for ...

I like how this is. It's a very dull topic but the figurative language makes it something more. I think the first few sentences were strong, and of course, the ...

I think this is very well-written. The ideas are clear enough, nothing TOO abstract as to prove he's just a poet that's trying too hard. The diction is very fluid ...